It's okay
Not the best, needs a LOT more action
3/5 and 6/10
Author Comments
I did better this time. I added sound effects, background music, and a better story. Please review and leave helpful hints as to what I can and/or should improve on! Thank you. :)
P.S. Hammer Bros. Productions is a little group I made for the Flash movies. I DID NOT copy this from someone else.
EDIT: I just found out that the sound is sometimes a little off on here. I apologise for that and I will work on that.
masterkoopa1015 responds:
'Kay
Nice!
I cant wait to see episode 2.
GOOD WORK!
masterkoopa1015 responds:
Thanks!
Yeeaaahhhh....
Well, I'd watch episode 2 to compare it to this one. Start working on it now then! Let's see how much better you can get! Make it like Super Mario Bros Z (without stealing his story/animation style)!!
GO GO GO GO!
~boney_man
seven.
masterkoopa1015 responds:
Like i said before, I will do whatever I can to make my flashes better. :)
i dunno...
well... in my perspective
your not giving a good reason to watch this again
You have to give a longer better story
and there is no need to hide the identity of the enemy when everyone obviously knows who it is
just put the caption with no question mark before it to hide the name...
If anyone would want to watch it still after seeing this...
id be suprised... really... im not trying to bring you down or be a jerk about it...
im just stating my opinion on it...
but hey... it takes a while to get used to making flash videos
look at others videos and check them out for reference
take a look at Alvin Earthworms Super Mario Bros. Z
its really awesome
but hey im not flaming here, at least your trying and know how to work flash
but im still a viewer not impressed...
good luck though
masterkoopa1015 responds:
You're right, it does take a while to get the hang of flash. Also, I wasn't expecting people to be impressed. But I won't give up! :) I will do whatever I can to make my flashes better.
P.S. Don't worry, you're not acting like a jerk. It's good to recieve informative and helpful criticism.
oh boy can't wait for ep 2
hahaha I LIKE IT!!! The only thing that you can add to make this better is maybe some voices for mario and the big red eyes (bowser?)
masterkoopa1015 responds:
Thanks! Episode 2 will be bigger and better! :)
