y existio un globo
muy buena historia pero en ocasiones se mescla la voz que narra la historia con el audio de la historia y no se entiende.te felicito buena historia los dibujos esyan pasables me gusta.
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spanish spoken,
hablada en espanol,
I RECOMMEND TO WATCH THE ANIMATION FIRST, THEN GO BACK HERE AND READ THE EXPLANATION IF YOU DO NOT SPEAK NOR UNDERSTAND SPANISH :) THANKS!!
maybe in a future i could add some subtitles.
thanks for the comments, i really apreciate them, and well there's a brief explanation in english about what is happenining in the animation:
This tale talks about a very small town, so small that its geographical reference and all that does not matter, the people in there live a normal and pacific life, the have their daily routine routine and nothing never changes, suddenly, one day when they were celebrating something, a big red balloon with a basket, appeared in the sky and landed in the middle of the town, everyone looked at the stranger visitor, but no one even care, they tought that the ballon will leave town when the wind would blow at night. The next day, the balloon was still there and people started to think it was not ok because it was in the middle of the town, the mayor gathered everyone in town and voted about removing the ballon from there, everyone agreed but one, the one called Mariano, a boy (the only one) who was wondering about how would it feel to ride the balloon, after some meditation, when, the town already decided to take away the balloon, he ran and jumped inside the red mystery, and so, the balloon begun the elevate with Mariano inside, the town's people asked screaming to Mariano about what was he doing or what was he trying to achieve, but he was already too far to hear what they have said. Something strange happened into the balloon, everything seem so real, the sun was warm, the wind was fast, everithing was real, the night was cold and it was not easy, bu everithing was so much better than before, because Mariano has awaken to life!!
it is more or less like a self improvement story, it tells you to DARE and take risks even when everyone can be against you.
ONCE AGAIN YOUR COMMENTS ARE WELCOME!!
cyberneoakira responds:
tenÃ-a super abandonada mi cuenta de Newgrounds, muchas gracias por dejar tu opinión, el audio fué desastroso, (se grabó en un baño mientras los vecinos demolÃ-an un piso...) no he hecho ya nada en flash, pero tengo algunas ilustraciones bastante mas elaboradas aqui mismo en NG :)
chido chido
pues me latio la animacion nada mas que a mi gusto sin el amarillo hubiera estado mejor pues como que desentona con el concepto de escala de grises y pues si tenia algun punto amarrillo por ahi colado peor bueno para ser de los primeros no creoque este mal y menos si dices que 5 años sin usar flash pero bueno en general estuvo merol (bien) haber cuando sorprendes con una nueva animacion
p.d. la enseñanza del don't b afraid and do it eventouhg some else says u are crazy was also something worthy.....ah y a todo esto qeu cuento es ese que no lo conosco
cyberneoakira responds:
saludos, el cuento se llama "..y existio un globo rojo." y su autora es Luisa Manjarres, gracias por tu opinion! seguire mejorando.
not bad man.
this is pretty good, i dont understand a word of it but i like the noir kinda
style, you need to spend more time to make it more artistic like, cos i can see
your unique style, how u made the sun behind the clouds and stuff, you see?
8/10
peace, taito.
cyberneoakira responds:
Hi, Thanks for the review, i added a breif explanation about what the animation says and of course if anyone recommends the use of subtitles I could make that happen.
Great
I Like It, I Know Some Spanish, Well, It´s nice give a chance for the latin people, they´re a nice artist too, sometimes better than others in us, everybody deserve a chance =)
cyberneoakira responds:
yup, everyone deserves a chance, thanks for the comment, i'll try to make some new animations, stay tuned :)