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StickBrothers

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This is my first submission to newgrounds ever..i realise im a noob and this isnt the greates thing ever submitted i'm a newgrounds fan myself and thats why im learning how to use flash! may aswell start with stick men eh? Anyway i want as much input as i can get, hints, tips advice anything that can help my movie and me get better at flash. Its all good aslong as u just dont tell me my movie sucks and u dont even tell me why! so help me out all critisism appreciated! Thanks guys :) (also i still have flash mx or w/e no flash 8 :( yes i know im noob! im working on getting flash 8 as soon as posibble so i can make new stuff and learn more things and make some ownage videos for newgrounds!!!! ty) if this gets anygood ratings im gunna be stoked hehe

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Pretty good.

For a stick figure movie, this is pretty decent. The animation was fairly smooth, and how you made the charaters talk was very original. could use some sound effects though. Just a suggestion, you should make a StickBrothers series! Just a suggestion. Also, It's not necessary to use entire songs, just short loops work fine.
Keep it up!

louisowns responds:

yah thanks man...only problem is i dont know how to stop songs and loop them...:( i was looking for songs that were the rite time limit anyone know how to stop a song and loop it again?

Not bad!

I actually liked it. It's really neat and the action is pretty good, but you really need sound effects... That was what was lacking, it was would be alot better if you added in punches and kicks. I do like the talking (red+green=exit and stuff). It was a bit confusing because all of a sudden green appears. Is he a real person? That part was a bit confusing. I did really like it though!

louisowns responds:

ty ty thanks for the advice and constructed critiscm aswell as good reviews?

cool

that was real nice you can do alot more with this if you just "(add some more sound afects,animation,and diolouge.)" but realy nice job

well

it wasent half bad...coulda added some sound or music anyway for first animation that was pretty good....try to make them do crazy acrobatics....try takeing a look at those SHOCK movies and stickman tortials and see if you cant learn nothing :D

good

the ending was the best

louisowns responds:

yay 10-10 ty

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Oct 22, 2007
6:44 PM EDT