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My first submission
good , good
a great concept boarder line awsome. but you should have continued the idea.
great work keep it up and good will come
Impressive for a first
Very good for your first submission. I suggest next time you add a preloader (I made the mistake of not doing that on one of my blammed flashes), and probably continuing the story a bit more.
Keep up the good work.
Is this really your first?
Way to go man! The animation isn't super-duper, but it's a really cool idea and I think you could do a lot with this. This isn't the work of a very experienced flash animator, but this way better than any first submission flash I've ever seen. Keep this up.
This is great for a first submission. Keep it up!
Even though the artwork was poor, the premise was interesting. With a bit more work, I can see this becoming a good series!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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