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Oct 18, 2007 | 8:19 AM EDT

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Edit: fixed the backgrounds so the text is easier to read.

Hello fellow newgrounders, this is my first submission to the site, and I must say i am glad to have my flash on here. This cartoon was made on the September holidays while I was bored so I thought about this character that was in pain and that lives in an old dirty house. I hope you enjoy this flash!

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RenaichuRenaichu

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 19, 2007

haha nice levi, im so proud of you =]]

but like i said last week before you submited it, you need to FIX the text, have a bit of shading and fix that damn gammin' front on house shot at the begining then it will be sweet.
x big sister
ps. use some of the custom fonts i have installed on the computer or use a text box or speech bubble like i said.



ValaraiyaValaraiya

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 18, 2007

It's salad fingers, but not as we know it

Leaving aside for a moment the striking resemblance to the work of a certain Mr Firth, this is a sweet little animation. Nicely made and visually interesting, it certainly has style. I agree with the other reviewers who said the text was hard to read and that it is somewhat lacking in the plot department, but honestly, the whole time I was watching all I was thinking was "Hey, this is Salad Fingers, just not as good", hence the low rating.

You obviously have some skill with the flashing, but basing your techniques so heavily on Salad Fingers just invites comparison between the two, and yours simply isn't as good. As many other reviewers have pointed out, originality is sometimes hard to achieve, but you'll earn much more respect for developing your own ideas than for piggybacking on someone else's success.



MinnersMinners

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 18, 2007

Hmmm.. Do you like Fat-Pie by any chance?

I can see the similarity from David Firth's movies to this one. I can say the drawings are good because of the colours and the style. The music set the tone of the movie making it really interesting. So my Overall score 8/10 P.S if you havent seen any of David Firth's movies I suggest you do it RIGHT NOW.... :)


Geebanguy responds:

yes i certainly do. i have seen all of david firth's movies and i must say they are superb in every way possible. i have all of his flashes on my 2 gigabyte usb. it is fun to watch them on rainy days when im having a cup of tea i think its a great way to watch them. anyway enough rambling, yes minners my flash is similar in a way to david's mysterious warm fuzzy feeling cartoons. but the music of aphex twin really helped to set the mood of the movie to make it unique on its own. also thanks for the review!


B34T1NB34T1N

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 18, 2007

Weird.

It's sorta like Salad Fingers.


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SparkwattclockSparkwattclock

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 18, 2007

This movie is very good

This movie made me sad, does he have asthma? Cuz I have it to. Good Job. It was a little creepy though.