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by: cheshyre
10/14/2007 | 04:03PM EST
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by DeridiousPrime: — Choose below… — What I've Done (Revised)
Here it is !!!1 After a few months on working on it due to my work schedule, I have finally completed my first episode of the short series "What I've done". I have decided to keep the intro movie in it. So afterthe title goes by in the intro movie there will be a long pause, but that doesn't mean the movie isn't working. The actual episode will come up after the long pause. Trust me itworks. Anyways, enjoy!!!
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Average Score: 4.6 / 10
"Ypu spell'elt episode wrong YOU MORON! >:("
That Sucked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Good Try"
It was decent, better then a lot of the stuff I have seen on NG. The music was pretty cool. The one thing that I would like to suggest would be to have less to read at the start, or at least have more time for people to read it. that was way too much in such a short period of time.
I know it was short and I hope that everyone see's this responce, but I the reason it took me so long is because I am in the army and also have a kid. So, I really didn't have a lot of time to work on it. I do have more of the movie, I just wanted to cut it short (I didn't think it would be that short when I submitted it) so that way I can see what people think and to see if this is something that should be pursued. And by what everyone says, it seems like all of yall like it enough for me to continue with this project. Don't worry, the next long will be longer and if there are any text that I do put into it, it willbe up long enough for you to read. Thanks for yall's comments and suggestions.
"OKAY"
it would have been better if it was longer and had better GFX
Next one will be and ahve better graphiks
"well..."
this was well made and it has a nice style to it but it was horribly short i mean it just started and it says to be continued, try makeing the epesodes longer please.
"A few months?!?"
Graphics: looked like a 3 year old drew it. Animation: Was good either Audio:Was kinda of crappy with quality.
Overall:This took you three months? You can't be serious. If it did that that much, I'm sorry for you. A animation like this can take 3 hours or less to make! I don't know. This whole review is constructive criticism.