Score: 5
"Needs improvement"
date: October 11, 2007
Here are a few idea's to help out with the rest of the game.
- You should fix the tab cheat. Some people never realize to. If you hold tab, you can see all the things click-able.
- Add more details to characters/walls/objects.
- Try to make it so maybe something would make you die, and you'd have to restart.(Don't need to)
- Maybe put more items in to more things.
- Next time have the demo at least longer.
- Have an inventory of your items. Then have it so you combine them with each other to make a special item. Then have it so you select your item and use it on a place. Instead of just clicking the vent like before. You'd have to test items on it.
- Maybe have it so you can interact with your friends.
- Maybe put in a small scene of them being scared, or why they came.
- Maybe when the kids got pulled back, you should of heard them scream or something.
Just a few idea's. Hope they helped a bit, and good luck with the rest of the game.
October 11, 2007
Author's Response:
thank you for the positive review! :D
1. In the second game you meet up with your friends.
2. I'm not that good at actionscript to have an inventory, but I'm working on it.
3. I didn't use any sound effects really. I think because i thought it would be more DRAMATIC!!!11!!!!1
4. I am gonna remake KIDNAPPED which is the other point-n-click game of mine, that neads polishing.
5. In the second one, i want to have a like, 'choose your path' thing like in Gears Of War. But i have to learn how to code that.
6. This wasn't a demo >:( ..... :| .......... :)
7. The art will be more IM-PROO-VEED in #2
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