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sorry about the pre loader, newgrounds was being a bitch and i couldnt download it. I havent figured out how to do one myself as im quite new to flash. This is my first ok piece of work about the rainforest. Enjoy :D vote high! :D =D <(^_^)>
nice try for a first time
Graphics:Well your very good at drawing I can see.The rainforest you''ve drawn was quite realistic and detailed.Keep it up!However only those birds and monkeys
weren't very nice because of the white around them.So for a better result learn how the rip pictures,sprites etc.. as long as you learn it the result of pictures like this will be better and try to put some more effort in the intro of your flash.Those pictures were nothing compared to what you can.
Style:Well it's quite refreshing to something like this cause I don''t see things like this often.However maybe indeed a bit to educational for me
Sound:Well the choice was actually quite good.It makes a fine combination with the subject.But maybe some more rainforest sounds will make it even better?
Interactivity:Well it was realistic enough for me
Humor:Well it was a real fun to see I think and very useful.Nice work
It was pretty well done for a project. I am sure you did well for it.
But, animation wise, not the best. Obviously, there is a lot you can do with flash, but to me, it was a bunch of motion tweens and some background and foreground changes. Try experimenting with mouth movements and smoother transitions.
Other than that, it was alright. 2/5
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A little too educational for me and mostlikley the rest of the NG comunity, but it is ok. The whole thing was a person whos arm kept bending inways that are, but don't look natural. Anyway the music is the only reason this got on. The animal animation was pretty good. I stoped watching about half way through because I got board; no offence. Put a little more effort into it and you could get something good. I do a lot of projects in koolmoves, wich is like flash except easier to animate in. Hope you got an A! One more thing; what grade are you in?
im not sure about grades because i live in england but im in year 9 and im 13. Thx for the review!
Overall it wasn't too bad ...
you could have put more effort into the animation .
Also i am not too sure about if you should upload your school essays on to the portal ...
nice but try this...
the animation was okay for this type of thing and I liked the amazon lesson (the tribes should look at miami) but try this... try to increase the amount of time that the wording is shown and use thiner lines for your background art (better focus on charecter and the background would look nicer)
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