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This is my first entry into the "Search" series and is also my first flash, one of many to come. After a deadly shooting John Steel (Alfred) is LAUNCHED INTO ACTION! Tell me what you think... any flash tips would be appreciated...
Well, I cant say its bad, but I cant say its really good either. Like you said, this is your first submission, and you actually tried here. You didnt make a chunk of steaming crap and try to excuse it for being your first flash submission. Im glad you tried, and the plot seems like an interesting one.
What I might suggest is make the text stay on screen longer, and make the falls more realistic. (When the guy gets shot and falls for example). And since you are a beginner, use tweens, and not FBF (Frame by frame) animating.
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