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The opening for a movie I hope to continue, depending on the feedback i get.
Hmm, I guess it was alright.
I liked the set-up to this at the very start, it looked like it was going to deliver a very good movie, unfortunately it didn't, what you had was alright though.
The scene in the house with the soldiers shooting wasn't very interesting at all, and it had this pointless violence feeling about it, then when they saw the bomb, you left the house too early, you should have shown the house from the outside and had it explode, to get the full effect across.
The scene of the guy getting shot in the helicopter, was poorly done, you should have shown the bullet going through his head as it looked a bit weird with his head just collapsing and then blood coming out of it.
The scene after was better as it was reverting back to the setting up of the story, and now I'm kinda looking forward to watching the rest of this series.
Overall, while the storyline is very much overdone and you had a couple fo poor scenes it was still an alright movie. you should have found more fiiting music to go with it as well and perhaps had some more sound effects included in it, obviously voices would have been a nice touch too.
Peace Out, Afro Stud
i realy just liked the music thats it everyone who does flash movies now a days does it that style and i hate it
But I've Seen A Film Just Like It.
(Not a flash one)
You can work on it but this is could be better if you put some more effort into the graphics...but hey, we're not all Leonardo's and Davinci's...good job.
I cannot wait 4 the sequel!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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