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A Clayman is on his way to a Karate Class!
Blak Tornado 2007
Ricky Rock rocks.
sqrew that guy below me
That was funny great!
This is sort of weird...I didn't get anything...Try applying more time to your animations and all because..You can't rush perfection....Also, try making it a little hilarious in any way...Just keep trying and ask yourself or anyone if it's funny or not... Or something...
As I've said to some other people, this was, unfortunately, not one of the best shorts that could have been showcased as it was a bit out-of-character compared to my more recent works. But that doesn't mean I'm not grateful to Tom, though.
Doesn't quite meet the standards in my opinion
Really, in comparison to all the other great claymations on NG this one was quite mediocre. Yes I'll admit your animation and clay figures were top notch, however, the writing was not. You obviously tried hard to be funny and I don't want to put you down by saying you wasted your time and effort trying, only you need improvement. The humor was lacking the most, it was repetitive and predictable, and not nearly enough to crack a smile. What I would suggest is either trying a different route in claymation, such as experimental claymation, or keep trying at the humourous knox style claymation, however it will require a lot more work and time put in to make every part funny.
In short, keep trying, I will always be a fan of claymation, whether it's wallace and gromit, Knox, or other experimental flashes, I always get excited when I see a new one, so I look forward to seeing more from you, but don't expect my reviews to be good if you keep making stuff like this :)
Thanks for your review and thanks for being civilized (Unlike half of the wolves on here :P)
Unfortunately, this wasn't one of my best shorts, but I shall take your advise and try and make things better with it :) Thank you
ok so...i really didnt find ths funny. nice job eith the animation and all, but you need to work on your humor.
This was one of my crappier shorts :P
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