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TFOS #1: Practice

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Oct 5, 2007 | 2:39 AM EDT

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Yeah, TFOS stands for ("The Fall of Sega"!) I needed to get sumthing on here so I decided to throw this on here, I want to call it "The Fall of Sega" part 1, but it is kinda short. It is my first flash anything so go easy on me! This was my practice shot, I'll get better and make the official Fall of Sega one of these days pplz.. i aint doin so good so far but I will muster up some kind of talent and story!

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cobra0528cobra0528

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good

I'm good with sprite flashes and I know how hard they are to do, nonetheless you need to make it more exciting. Like I said, it was good, and the story was pretty funny, but you need spice. Not much else to say...good job


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Cladicus-Claveman responds:

thnx alot for reviewing. I'll get to less tlk more action next time


KurvosKurvos

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Don't be so hard on yourself.

I mean, you are pretty good - especially for a starter! I think you can make really good flash-animations in the future! The only thing you need to change is less dialouges, more visible and bigger text, and some background music.=)



cheshirecat1582cheshirecat1582

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

yeah

Honestly, dude... its boring... I didnt even read the words half the time... it needs some audio.... or you need to express how they are feeling with out any typed words... cuz i came to new grounds to watch movies not read them... and if you are going to keep the sub titles please change the color... its sooo hard to read... so thats why i didnt end up reading them... yeah all in all redue the animation... make it more you rown and record voices.... thats all... other wise its funny and good...



JakBaronKingJakBaronKing

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Hm.....seems incomplete

You overwhelm the flash with huge scenery and small *almost microscopic" flash characters with the tinest font I've ever had to read on a flash movie.

I'm sure you a beginner...If so you can bone up your skills in the Flash Tuturial Section of Newgrounds. Some made by Tom Fulp himself.

You really left me at a cliff hanger. It kinda reminds me of SMBZ. by Alvin Earthworm or at least it seemed to be going in that direction.

I'm sure you've got story tallent, but what good is that if you can't express it with your full potential.

Don't worry, be patient, you can take all the time you need before sending your next flash.

If your not being hired to do flash...I would suggest taking as much time as you need to make whatever you do satifictory to yourself.

Remember...no one should offend you, even if they purposelyt try to....take any sort of advice and criticism in stride towards self-improvement.

Good luck!



bvncbvncbvncbvnc

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

first flash not bad

Not bad; though it seems a little like the super mario dbz series.

-First i would find a better way of presenting the text as just a line and the words. Get creative leave no stone unturned, no detail half asked a text cloud always work also might need a button to go forward because though u or i can read fast not every one can the action script required for that is almost laughable in its simplicity and supreme lack of effort required, though I haven't played with flash since mx 6 so what do i know.
-Second don't know what angle the series will take but a parody of th smdbz flash would bring some attention to you. also use the wealth of tutorials on ng, and study the different styles and take notes on the flashes of all the popular flash artist on ng.
overall suprisingly alright for a first flash it has potential, sprites are good way to start. good luck with future projects I will be wathcing for more flashes from you