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This animation is about a turtle named Jimmy Vegas who loses control, after someone eats his lunch.
The story is fairly loose and ridiculous but it's all just a bit of fun really.
aftiel from the forum did all the voice acting/narration.
I spent a long time making this and it's great to finally get it done, this is my first actual 'animation'.
I love reading/replying to comments, it really makes it all worthwhile.
NOTE: If you're using an older PC you might have to set the quality lower if you are getting lag.
EDIT: " I've uploaded a new version frame rate is increased from 20 to 25, hope it's better now. (I'm sorry I didn't notice this before, I feel like an idiot.)"
EDIT 2: Thanks for all the reviews guys, I'm enjoying reading them all and I'm taking the feedback into consideration.
Good Job !
Pretty good as a first animation ! The Music made it really funny, maybe yeah, a lil too much gore on the father turtle, Rofl. That was still funny to watch, and as a first animation, Congratulation !
Keep Working !
overkill on the dad doncha think? hahaha
I agree with
wu-aphex... it was really... mediocre.
Maybe a little less Still images and more killing? And The Voice acting was too soft and made me sleepy.
really slow, awkward animation, terrible pacing, static camera angles, meaningless violence. a very poor flash. it's obvious you know how to draw but not how to animate or tell a story. i would focus less on the sound effects (in which there are almost too many) and more on giving the viewer something worthwhile to watch
A short film about a park bench
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