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This is the best flash ive done by far in my opinon so i hope you enjoy it!
it took me about a week. I got the cast of my finger about the 6th day in production.
I had to cut it in half of an exporting error. Look out for part-b enjoy!
It is too slow, and some scenes are difficult to understand or have no sense at all (like the one of the red guy throwing a head to the green guy)
lolz yes i know
it was ok
not that great. the music didn't really sync, there wasn't a lot going on, very slow moving. The art style was way too simple. It was just shy of stick figures. they were basically madness style sticks. There were too many tweens, and they didn't move very quickly. It needs some work. Not horrible, but not that great.
ehh ill take it thx for the review
i guess too lolz
Not too bad!
Very nice colouring and emotions, and the characters don't look the same - well, not all of them. That's a good thing.
But what you should improve on first is active poses, especially in fights. When your characters throw a punch, make them express the effort, and show how their body moves - with simple characters, that isn't so hard. I'm still practicing that. But practice makes perfect.
Good luck, and looking out for more of your stuff.
thx ill be sure to imporve in part b!
thx for the review
It was alright...
It was pretty good, the only problem is when your characters die, they don't die realistically. For instance, when one was choked to death and he slumped over, he didn't seem to be slumping against the wall. He looked like he was still standing. I think you might want to work on that. Otherwise, your drawing and animation was fine.
yea i know ill redo that today
thx for the review!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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