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This is just a small story that i made some time ago. i hope you like it. issa
ok, now with music!
Graphics: The graphics were really well drawn, nothing much to complain about there.
Style: The animation was pretty smooth, and you represented people's reactions/emotions well, with the lack of audio.
Sound: Adding backing music, or vocal effects would really help interest viewers, and gain higher scores.
Violence: No real violence here.
Overall: This was really well done, and it would've been much better if audio had been included, which is really my only problem here.
I'm not hearing anything... Is there sound? If there isn't, or if it uploaded wrong, you should have sound or music in here somewhere.
It could have used some sounds, but overall, it was good.
PRETTY NICE ART
however, I cant give you a lot of points since no audio was used and there was no preloader.
i loved your animations, but it felt incomplete without sounds and music.
im sure if you were to add some creepy music and proper sounds, it would score a 5/5
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