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Quick! Hide from the Gaspbodies. Your neighbour's old apartment looks like a safe place, although she didn't seem to be around a lot anymore lately.
it was ok but i couldnt understand it, try usin english next time. but other than that not a bad effort.
a few comments
Make more details, write in english, make it more fluent and indeep the plot.
nice use of a camera. that last part scared me.what happens
But it would be better if it was in English. Cuz I don't know if I died or what's happening.
What are Gaspbodies? :/
There only seem to be two opitons, and both bump you back to the beginning. Also, the extreme amount of contrast here makes it hard to see what those choices are.
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