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This is my FIRST FLASH!!
keep you criticism constructive!
i know it doesn't really have a point..
i was just practicing.
thanks for the reviews, guys. ;3
i really like to know what you think.
and yes, im sure this is my first flash xD
Interesting, even if it's still drafty
I agree with most of the guys who reviewed you... clean it up and make stuff look better. You're good with keeping the interest meter up; keep us curious.
is there a plot?
better animation and i'll rate better
That was pretty cool, went really smooth.
And we all know how hard it is to make flashes.
That's was amusing
For a first time that's kickass, I goofed with flash and i'm just not cut out for it right now. maybe with some practice.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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