Score: 6
"acting made me chuck"
date: March 16, 2008
I like how the poles make it look kinda like a prison as you/Wyvern walk in/out of college.
Your overacting made me chuckle and the end was a nice way to introduce your latest character. Now I'm sad I didn't watch this/that in order.
I think the last line kinda needed a pause before it to help the joke work.
£1 for a bottle seems a bit much btw.
The bin/bottle were drawn pretty well. Still, you could take your graphics up another notch.
On the subject of graphics, It does irritate me (though I've kept silent) when you attribute 'Google' for graphics - they helped you source some images etc. but the graphics were made by other artists/photographers so they remain unattributed.
Good flash as usual.
March 16, 2008
Author's Response:
500ml bottles usually cost 90p here.
I intend to take my graphics up another notch when I'm onto making my 100th flash. That's if I don't end up running short on time. I wish to have the flash done before August.
