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Ok so I have some issues with it, (that's the reason I was putting it off for a year), but I figured I should finish it and get it out there.
I put the musical selections on my user page.
An Honest Review
The animation has great style and is very well done. That is why you are getting a 7. The reason why you aren't getting a 9 or 10 is because that was the main thing you had going for you. The humor didn't come close to matching the first one (two). Especially before they got on the tank, the pace of the piece was a lot slower than it should of been. I think that even though the humor was in the same style for the most part, it wasn't as smart in this one as the other ones. Just focus more on the idea and the script.
i know the pace was slower, that was intentional. sorry you didnt like it, but i dont completely agree with you.
cock joke and pythagorn theory are my 2 favorite jokes n ur animation and graphics are awesome but all the takemen sound alike work on that plz!
this was not as funny as the first one was, try to make the other ones better
The animation and creativity alone make this a great flash. The jokes and one-liners are icing on the cake. The soundtrack is well chosen. I think I heard one of the songs from the movie Snatch which is a cool movie too. But nothing is perfect and the only advice I think I should give is the voice acting. You have a clear and articulate voice for the characters but it's the same voice for all of them and it's hard to differientiate between each of them. I know you put a lot of hours and hard work and I don't want to sound like some pompous asshole that knows all about flash because I don't but I do watch a lot and sometimes a little tweak can make the difference. May I suggest using some more people just to give contrast and identity between the voices of the characters. I'm sure there are plenty of people that would want to add their voice to your work. Besides that you did very well and should be rewarded with cookies from Newgrounds or drug money.
Okay, but i coulda gone without explit audio and stuff (im not all up for that.)
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