congrats splosh
im going to give it an 8 coz...like "2good2bfgoten" said...you let the joke go in too long
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This is just a simple flash animation I made for my Dad's birthday. Hope you enjoy!
It features the main character (Dad), having a daydream...
The humor died.
Alot of animations like these are ruined because you let the joke go on far too long.
You tried to display a high energy vibe such as a rock concert and only showed still frames of a stick guy mucking around with a guitar.
The sound also was dodgy on the looping, try using FL or Acid Pro to fix it up, you can get free trials from there sites.
I'm aware that this is just a birthday thing (Happy birthday to your dad by the way), but if you're submitting it to Newgrounds, you're going to get criticism... no matter what it is.
Happy Bday to your pops!
Funny little vid. That was awesome of you to do this for your dad. I lol'd when he dreamed about being 21 again. Good stuff. I maybe would've lowered the backround music a bit so it wouldn't muffle the guitar/drum solo's but this is still really good.