Score: 9

"Very nice...."

by: Crono561

date: October 21, 2007

What I liked: The part were that clay ball ccame out of the door. that must have been hard to do.

What I didn't like: the part were all you did was draw lines in the clay, also should not have let the sissors on screen.

What to do: Actually this was really good. I think you might want to do some more fun sections in the story like the part with the rock, or the kamakazi clay person with a gun. That was a funny part.... Do more of THAT kind of thing. you are good at that.

Other: Keep making these, as I know you have no reason to stop. Good work again.

Score: 6

"Amusing."

by: Dew

date: September 23, 2007

Well this was an amusing flash to say the least. This time, it was longer and had a slight story to it. Although you still didint give us any real reason or enjoyment out of watching it, it still managed to be a good submission overall. The quality was exceptional, and everything came out clear. Still though, nothing is going to beat a story, maybe something about gansters since you obviousley know how to make guns. Good job.

Score: 5

"Alright"

by: Heinrich

date: September 23, 2007

GOOD: I'd say that was a good practice flash for you. They seemed to take on a life of their own. I did get a kick out of the part when one of the clay men brought a gun.

BAD: Not really the type of clay flashes I like.

IMPROVE: You can add in a story because a story is a very important part of a flash.

OVERALL: It was an alright start but I suggest you start making claymations with stories. You have good potential.

Score: 5

"not to shabby"

by: chocobowz

date: September 23, 2007

it looks pretty good
for a test
but with alot of clay like that,
i can imagine you doing something cool with it.

Score: 10

"For a test..."

by: KitsuMech

date: September 23, 2007

I would say that you passed.

Good job.

Hopefully we'll see some full length clay-mation pieces from you?

5/5