Score: 5
"Very Madness Day"
date: September 28, 2009
Overall, lacking in plot, much like the early madness pieces, but the animation was a poor attempt to emulate Madness, coupled with the bad looking blood splatters.
I appreciate that you're not using Flash to try and make a movie here - it does cause you one or two issues with the creation of a well designed submission - the animation is jerky at best and given that there are items that have been taken from other locations, such as the AK-47, you're going to end up with a piece that doesn't give a good overall impression.
With the characters turning around, try to draw them at three or four different angles and blend them together, so that it looks better, as opposed to them being exposed as a sheet of pixels. Little things like this are where great animators like Krinkels started, before working their way up to bigger and better things, like you could well be capable of doing.
Shouldn't the AK be firing bursts of 3 rounds? Yu're not being charged by the shot, so throw in a few more, it's way too professional to kill with one shot, after all :P
[Review Request Club]
September 28, 2009
Author's Response:
Thanks!
~ Z
