Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
watch the newest one!
I'll give you some merit for trying but the "Vote 5's" and lack of animation as well as the all male voices did not help. As it has been mentioned, try and make a 2 - 4 second loop of smooth animation and then repeat it (making about 4 different loops for 4 positions). Other then that it was ok for a first try.
thank you dont forget to recomment to the hetai collection xD
its okay, but i think you need to work on your frame by frame animation, make it a little smoother instead of having just 1 frame going up and down, cause thats what it looks like! xD its pretty good though, your animation drawing is ok, ive seen soo much worse! this isnt accually that bad, its pretty good, just try and make some more frames and pictures with different positions so it will look like there accually doing somthing! , anyways good job keep it up!
OK TO WATCH
IT SEEM OK TO ME
sorry for the low score but
youi need to work on your animation
it's also repeditive, all it shows is one position.
be more creative.
plus get a voice actor.
O.K. I'll review this for you.
I'll give you a 5/10 because at least your trying to make flash. It was pretty good but I don't want to sound like a freak about the intercourse parts but it just looked like an image bouncing up and down. The characters should be two parts of a whole not just one whole part.
Xavas Live Visual Animation
Harry Episode 2 - Flashbacks
"They Took His GIRL. Now He'll take their SOULS!"
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.