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The Composer is an animation following the life cycle of a young boy to adulthood, who uses the purity of music to heal wounds, and inspire the hearts of others.
I sincerely hope you enjoy this, it has taken a lot of work.
Thanks Tom Fulp for your fantastic support, and Francine Louise for your voice talent
Since you are only 18 you use the emotion part alittle too much with too much tears and crys...actually you dont have to...becouse it makes it look cheasy and gives away too much. The looks in characthers EYES was enough...and there for silent sadness comes...What I call ''ART'' is the very thing that gives emotion..since you did that you are an artist...and very few people can pull that off...thank you for this movie and keep up the very good work. When you will grow alittle older you will know much better to control the amount of emotions that you will give....timing will come in time.
it is a good break from the action stuff (which i still like better, cus flash is good at it, and it is hard to control flash when you want to make emotional stuff.)
the begining = end = begining thing has always been an interesting koncept, however it has been used so much, that i would say it has become a cliche. it is an easy way to write a story. but it's ok.
animations are ok. I would say to all who use tweening all over the place; that sometimes it gives a much more spohisticated look to ignore tweening, maybe only use it for backgrounds. the tweeny animation look is a bit annoying to look at. in a way.
anyways. don't get me wrong. i think this was a nice piece. keep it up. and think about how to tune you skills and your style.
7 = above average
A step up from PALADIN
The overall quality was good for Newgrounds stuff. I liked not seeing mega-buff meat-sack dudes. I have to complain, in terms of visuals, that all the faces look pretty much the same. Your problem is that you can't escape cliches. Everything you make is bogged down with the same cheesy stuff I've seen on everything. Seeing people cry in cartoons is just annoying. A lot of artists use it without giving a good lead up; it's so commonly just used to force that emotion on people. Now, I know you had that whole broken family thing, but, again, cliche'd up the yang.
As much as it fit the cliche, cheesiness, I did like the ending. I have to admit I love ending at the beginning.
Another beautiful animation by you.
Very moving story. Excellent work, as usual. I've seen a few Flash movies with a similar theme, but this has something about it that makes it simply brilliant. Nice work.
Wow, thats really deep.
Great ending man, I loved it. Really emotional, Keep it up dude!
the sequel u didnt ask for is finally here!
Lucy and Ben get fingered by a hobo in an alleyway. Wait...
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