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i made this when i had free time at school one of my first attempts at buttons and such
well i think you should take a look at gun a few gun tutorials, to see what muzzle flashes REALLY look like and such. for your second flash, this was pretty good.
only ur second movie so it was good.
Hope you make it through
It was decent
Could use some work.
What I would suggest is slow down some of it. I cant read the text because it goes by too fast. I get lafway through reading the longer stuff and its gone. Also, use tweens instead of FBF moving objects manually... Some sounds would be great, this lacks the sound part. Another tip would be to create a walking cycle.
So after you improve those things, I think you can create much higher quality flash.
But for effort you get 5/5 :D It seems you actually tried here.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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