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Emily's Trip

Author

lukedraik

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Yann Teirsen (Buy!)

Date Submitted

09/15/2007 | 12:52PM EST

File Information

Movie | 1 MB

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Current Score

3.76 / 5.00

Score Rank: #14,502
Popularity Rank: #89,366

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Author Comments

I know it looks like a CCC rip-off, I tried to avoid that... so don't go 'OMG U ripped off Vee OMG!' Anyways, this is for my friend Emily's birthday!

it was rushed, so I know quality is bad, but it is my longests movie so far, and best animated as well. Expect better in the future though, this one had a deadline! =D

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Average Score: 8.6 / 10

Score: 10
1800ccp

"Awsome"

date: September 17, 2007

heh it may hav something to do with that that is my gf

but still its really good 4 thumbs up nate

September 17, 2007

Author's Response:

...? Well, glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

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Score: 8
dr3867

"That was pretty good"

by: dr3867
date: September 15, 2007

I thought the story was synced well with the music, even though I did think that the hot-air ballon sequence wasted a bit too much time.
Also, I noticed you had some audio problems w/ your previous flash. I have this same problem, you put your voice in, and it comes out an octave higher. It seems the only way to fix this is w/ mixing software, but then you have to pay for it.
Although that may not be the best comparison, as I am not as experienced as you are in animation.

September 15, 2007

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, in my earlier animation, me and my friend were 11, and so our voices were high, but the low quality was from him not beleiving in sensative microphone... Thank you for the review, that song is great for animating with, and you got me, the balloon scene was a time waster! =\

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Score: 10
FanceyPants

"Good job"

date: September 15, 2007

It was a nice clip. Very nice, nothing like an outing with a friend, but when the mouths where moving and no sound was coming out like with the hot air balloon was that on my end or did u make it that way? It would have been nice if u kept up with the bubbles. Like if they showed what they were talking about, but it was very nice. As for the rushed part, I over looked it because the story and all ran good.

September 15, 2007

Author's Response:

Thank you my good sir! Yes, I did leave the voices out, because I felt that the music would help move the story along for it. But you're right, even I don't know what they're saying! XD

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Score: 8
Lone-Ronin1

"nice job."

date: September 15, 2007

very good job. Your animation needs some work, but it was nice to see something of effort. The art could have been better. Keep practicing and you could got far.

September 15, 2007

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I will practice, and I will try a lot harder! =D

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Score: 7
Migel

"OMG u ripped of Vee :D nah just joking nice flash"

by: Migel
date: September 15, 2007

I can see you have some inspirement from that guy but it had its own touch into it 2 ( believe me I have seen a lot worse ), looked nice and I can you have put some time into it :) And I think the only 2 CCC links I could make were the bandagesticker and the smiley on that building.

Other than that it was a nice little story. However like u said urself the graphics were not that high because you rushed it a bit but there was also not that much animation but a lot of effort had been put into it and I enjoyed watching it :)

September 15, 2007

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! =] Vinnie is too inspiring, and even though it was rushed, the first thing I'd do after school was try to see how much time I could add to it before homework and dinner! XD

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