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NOTE: this is my very first flash to pass the portal so it means alot to me, it marks the point where I started getting good enough with flash to create something people may like.
the people kept moving around you didn't remove the crediting thing from the bottom so i know you got it from sprite database.learn how to use flash
You can do better , by having a better animation of the 2 ninjas , and having some sounds of them , that is what they said to me .
once again i..
think you failed.
as a first submission it was decent.
but if this wasn't your first, no.
well... i think you made something quite unoriginal
since i've seen something like this with sasuke and naruto.
the music skips over if you watch it 2 or more times, it should start and end at a reasonable point to it doesn't carry over and/or sound STUPID.
god man get it right.
get it right.
thank you once again for making me laugh, please the moment I relleass my next game reveiw it and pm me, and yes this was my first submission, I do keep it here to remind myself of the progress im making.
Not too bad
Kind of short. The song didn't fit too well. Still an ok fight. And I agree with kingkillah, this definetly deserves a better score. So 5/5(cause it deserves a better score) and 6/10(cause that's what I really think of the flash). And I hope you make the sprite series and i'm sure it will get a good score, it may even be put on the front page if you work hard on it.
I know it's not perfect but it DEFINATLY deserves more than its current score. I like it, it's not that great but it's not bad either. I'll give you a 5/5 because of the low score, that preloader took forever though. Nice job man, better than my first attempt at flash (No I'll never submit it was that bad I:(.. ) Good job man...
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