I made this short movie so anyone could critisize my style. Am I going to fast? Are the moves to "robotic"? Tell me anything that you found was anoying in anyway...
As I was saying this is haft of the intro to kakashis's blood wich will be a fictional series involving kakashi's past.
EXPECT A LOT MORE SOON!! :D
SORRY ABOUT THE GRAMMAR ERRORS...
Wrong!
First point, as I am a true Naruto admirer:
1- Everyone knows Kakashi, also by Copy ninja;
2- Kakashi isn't Chunnin, he is Jounin, one level above chunnin;
3- the animation was kinda slow;
4- The other guy is obviously Sasuke, for it's form and hair style;
5- You could make it be Tobi instead, and then he would reveal to be Obito (Kakashi's childhood friend) or Madara Uchiha.
Other than that, i guess it was good...
kakashi is a jonin
Kakashi is stronger then chunin i agree with the other guy the word you should use is chakra
It was a good storyline :D
The story line isn't too bad, only one thing I need to say on the negative side, you need to just put the frame rate up a bit. seems you may be working on like 12fps or something? maybe put the frame rate to about 18 or 16 at its lowest :D nice movie.
Good for first flash
I think the word you were looking for was "chakra" and not "chuunin" other than that very good animation for a first go!
ok it was ok
I gave you a 6 out of 10 for my reviw and i gave you a five out of five
just because it is your first animation one on newgrounds
good job