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Violet and Ravi in a fast-paced race across the futuristic city of Freetown
Do NOT smoke and skate!
I gave this low score only so that you would read this review.
I think your animation skills are great, and keep up the good work, but I can tell by your characters actions, that you have never smoked any tobacco. (which is good, keep that up). just that its not possible to lite a sigarret without sucking it at the same time.
I know this is just one stupid and boring detail, and I know that you are propavbly gonna say that those are future-sigarettes and they dont work the same way... but never the less thats how it goes in the real world.
Real scores: 9
The only thing that was great about was the art and animation which was incredible, but do some work on the girl's face I actually thought she was a boy. The dialouge was very corny and there was no plot or action just a race in a city we don't know. We don't even know their names or the reason why they were racing let alone where they got the rollerblades. The city looked like a rip off of CC city. The whole flash was big rip off of "the race" made by vinnie veritas, anyone who knows and seen his work would agree with me.
Sorry to give such a low score.
why do you need to know why they were racing? is that required knowledge in order to enjoy the cartoon? and sorry but i think vinnie would disagree with you. i like his work, but i would never copy it. our cities look completely different both stylistically and aesthetically. aside from the fact that they are big, i don't see how you could make any comparisons to the two. he didn't explain why his characters were racing either. ;)
you're only giving this a low score because you're upset i banned you.
Ok I dident like it at all... cuase of 10 reasons my Friend
1. Whats the story line? raceing? ok but what made them race? was it for a bet? just for fun? what?! (Work on your plot)
2. The girls face kind of looked like a guy's face try and improve on the girls face
3. what city is it?
4. What are there name's?
5. Ware did they get those rollare blade's?
6. The start of the anime. was awsome but when it the two characters just started to race for no reason it lost me and I lost interast in the flash.
7. What is there BIO and backround (characters history and BIO)
8. Are they friends? or foes?
9. what year and what setting?
10. and the last thing you might wana check up on is the mood of the flash! (the mood of something sets the viwer going like lets say this character named chris joins this new school out in the nevada desert and once he arives there nobody is there and its getting dark and he hears sounds comeing from all over the school) see that sets the mood that the viwer is creeped out about the enviroment its getting dark and the viwer hear's sounds just like in a horror game it sets the mood of the player he's scard of out his mind.
all and all I still dident like the flash but it was OK I can give you thta much credit but thats it.
This doesn't look like Air Gear at all.... Not really sure what the "No Stars" button will do for a score(hope it doesn't just give it a 0), but I only intend to be neutral - as in I didn't love it, but it's not bad so I won't rate it since I wasn't swayed either way.
omg Animation and Music!
DUDE! This is one of the best animated Flash Movies i have ever seen also i love that song is there a place you can download or listen to it maybe it has a name so i can get it on mp3?
Please make more!
well i can't really do that, but i'm glad you liked it.
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