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Violet and Ravi in a fast-paced race across the futuristic city of Freetown
YES!!! It's finally done!!!
So... this is the project you've been working on for what... a year and a half? Well, it seems to have paid off in spades. Everything looks AMAZING. The backgrounds were gorgeous and the animation is some of the most impressive I've ever seen. I like how you played around a lot with the perspective and camera angels too. :P Some things kind of reminded me of Vinnie Veritas's stuff.
I thought the race started way too abruptly. It's like, the female character is just sitting there smoking when suddenly the male shows up and blurts out... "Ready? Set...?" I was like.. whoa, that was completely left field there. I felt like the race ended even more abruptly. What you really need is more anticipation. There was just one thing happening after another without much to really hold it all together.
I know that seems like a lot of criticism, but I seriously loved your movie and there were so many things about that were insanely well done. I'm still giving you a ten. ;)
Keep animating, man.
Nice stuff mate!
keep 'em coming ;)
Very Nice Flash
Nice flash, though you could work on the running timing a bit. It was very interesting to watch. The movements were really well done. I would like to see more of the series.
Really well animated
It all looked very great and every shot was creatively and effectively done; not lessened for ease (of which I'm guilty of all the time). The actual subject matter I found uninteresting and overdone. The Cyberpunk roller-blading future stuff was ruined for me with Jet Set Radio Future and several Japanese cartoons I didn't even want to watch in the first place (not a fan of anime).
In short, you showcased some amazing skills and will effectively entertain your audience, but probably won't catch the attention of many non-anime fans save for those taking a peek at your skills presented therein.
Perfection. Pure perfection.
After all the time I've known you, you've really come a long way rtil. Your stuff has gone from the ground up. There was nothing wrong with this animation whatsoever. Pure beauty. You are a fine example of someone who I, among many other animators, should take inspiration from. Nothing on this site compares.
4.30 / 5.00 (+ 0.0031)
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