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09/04/2007 | 11:26PM EST
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2.16 / 5.00
Score Rank: #102,935 Popularity Rank: #127,087
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Sorry about not having comments before, i was in a rush and had to go. The next part will be longer, hopefully... yeah and the alarm, well i couldn't find a good alarm sound. and ill try to add a preloader to the next one, but for some reason i couldn't get any to work.. im using cs3, any suggestions? if liked please favorite. and watch out for part two!
everything was made by me except the guns were made by cyberdonkey at flash industries and the some backgrounds were made from a tutorial at flash industries. but the rock one was by me ;)
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Average Score: 5.0 / 10
"not bad"
it was an alright animation... but way too short. this one had a nice idea behind it and you put a nice effort into it, but i do think that it should've been expanded on more. oh well, nice job either way... but its lacking in length hurt this one.
"Good and bad...."
This showed a lot of promise, u should add a pre loader and add it longer, and try to get better audio, and cut the silent alarm down, but at the same time, the art work was great
"Not enough to stand on it's own"
There was just not enough to this flash to give it any sort of feeling Endings don't have to be cliffhangers but some sense of "what happens next" should be there. More sounds needed , 5-6 seconds of a silent alarm bogged down the flow
"needs some improvements"
How about some author comments and a pre-loader? The movie kept halting half-way through because it wasn't fully loaded. Pre-loaders really help.
Good drawings though -- just needs some comments and a pre-loader.
"Weapons looked good"
The weapons were nicely detailed. Everything else was just... bleh.