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A short animation I made for University. Tells the story of a man named Jeffery, who suffers from a split personality. This is my first NG submission.... So Enjoy!
Audio is From Aphex twin and Korn.
It was OK i guess. I'm not quite sure what you were going for here, and I hope it wasn't originality. The style, the idea of split personality, the guy killing himself. They're all old themes seen in movies and flashes time and time again (Fight Club, Killer Toast, etc). The art style was nearing David Firth and stuff like that that, but wasn't nearly as good. Sorry if I didn't like it, but I don't think it's front page material.
Fight club was better
this would have been cooler if i never saw fight club :D
It was a good flash, my only problem with it was if I had it loud enough to hear ther voice in his head, his own voice was very loud and the scratch noises were too overpowering. If you make another flash, try to watch those details with the sound. Having the scratch there is fine, having it there loudER than the rest of the noise, is bad. Stuff like that should stay as an ambient sound.
the last reviewer was wrong
schizophrenia is a completely different condition from split personality or Dissociative identity disorder. so the artist knew his stuff :P
also yes they can talk to the other personalities but its rare.
The video reminded me of silent hill in style. Very well done!
not bad, 8/10
i did like the movie, and the whole concept behind it
but do keep practicing, you can still improve on it ;)
and just a sidenote (and i can be mistaken here) but someone who is schizofrenic (spelling check please) or has double/multiple personalities normally can't have two or more personalities active at once. it's only one at a time. so jeffery talking to his other personality, isn't really possible... or he's just really twisted
but hey, it's just a flash movie, let's not argue about facts here ;)
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