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A short animation I made for University. Tells the story of a man named Jeffery, who suffers from a split personality. This is my first NG submission.... So Enjoy!
Audio is From Aphex twin and Korn.
A man with a "split personality" and one of the personalities in question is homicidal in nature?
You'd be hard pressed to find a story with spilt personalities being the main gimmick that does not include that as a premise.
The drawings we're very poorly drawn and the rare amounts of animation that did not include text or changing the alpha of something we're very distracting due to the sheer lack of it.
It was uninspired, incredibly generic and poorly executed.
It's not suprising though that the newgrounds audience enjoys it as it includes senseless violence and an overly done "creepy" feel to it...something that they thrive on.
I would be very curious to find out what grade you received for this
"animation" and what your instructors had to say about it.
I'm typically not this harsh, but i'm very tired of mediocre at best things being regarded as "great works" because most people cant sit and write a decent story.
Overall: 8/4 = 2
Wow! Fantastic drawing!
But man, aside from that. This is one of those movies that once your done watching it, it makes you say "Wow I really feel good now!" (thats sarcasm)
Was great very nicely done. I like the txt at the start makes you think how hard it must be for people who have this problem great work guys.
really good especially the drawings
Why is it that so many people put Aphex Twin in their twisted animations? :) Heheh. Rhetorical question, The Aphex Twin guy puts out some twisted ambient. You should check out his Selected Ambient Works Volume II, pretty twisted and eerie stuff, great for animations. :P
Anyway, I enjoyed this, good job with it, but I agree with the guy below, the voices sounded a little low. When I saw this it reminded me of the movie Fight Club, and Jack's decision at the end of the movie.
I like the darkness, and the little 'flashbacks' when the blood appeared. Very dark, my kind of animation. I didn't really like Jeffery's evil-half's voice though. :P I dunno what it was, just didn't seem too sinister, or seemed like it was trying too hard to be sinister.
Anyway, good job.
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