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A short animation I made for University. Tells the story of a man named Jeffery, who suffers from a split personality. This is my first NG submission.... So Enjoy!
Audio is From Aphex twin and Korn.
David Firth meets Fight Club??
I agree with notorious- this is practically the same exact animation as "Roof Tiling." The story, look, style, characterization, and basic idea are the same. And just like "Fight Club," the main character, realizing the evil is all in his head, shoots himself. Only difference is this guy didn't live.
I think your overall ability is there, you just need to try for a better and more original story. And lastly, the static was a bit distracting...less of it would have more impact. When static comes it's supposed to be disorientating, but if it's used very frequently, it loses all impact.
well even in the first few minutes i could tell this was a HUGE ripoff of David Firth's 'Roof Tiling'. Anyone who's seen it and doesn't think so is incredibly ignorant. There were a bit too many similarities. I say, get your own idea and style, you have potential.
that was some kind of melancholy I felt after watching this.
don't listen to the that guy...
the animation was nice and it had a warm feeling to it. Im not here to criticize because I can't make flash or anything else for that matter. i give mad respect to ayone who can do this sort of thing and this flash was a wonderful piece to veiw.
so the guy who said it was not unique or whatever..take your reveiw and shove it right back up your ass. i don't see any submissions from you let alone anything that tops this.
good job nitro-man.
But the art is a bit lacking Its cool but needs some work around the edges. The idea is fun but I feel like this has all been done before. Particularly David Firth comes to mind he has animations almost exactly like this one.
That aside its still a good story with pretty good artwork.
The return of Dr. Bees!
Goling about and preventing things.
He was working in a whip shop in Flushing, Queens...
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