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This is the very first flash I ever did. To show how basic of skills I had this was still done without tweening but frame by frame movement :P.
But it is always good to see where I started. Hope you all enjoy Cats shoot each other.
I'm giving a low review manly for the lack of sound as well as the plot it self felt very unfinished but you didn't do a be continued or anything. I realize this was your first flash so I won't be too harsh but the animation needed work and there were some grammatical errors in the speech. Keep it up though.
yeah thanks alot for the advice because i wasent sure if i was going to continue this one or not so thats why it ended strange!
...Ok, I'm tired, but here's something...
Try to use tweening when it can be hidden(backgrounds, special effects...etc.). Try to use something other than two big, fat bars as lips, and don't make word bubbles and long text without making buttons for the watcher, unless you add voices...
All that really matters to me is that you put time, effort and thoughtfulness into your movies... but I felt as though something was so lacking that it compelled me to rate this movie harshly...
that was pretty cool
i liked it, but keep working at it
the cats reminds me of bob from kemit kombat
A great start!
It looks like you've REALLY got potential! This is by far the best work I've seen from a novice in Macromedia Flash. Another prominent quality is that you can really capture the essence of a drama/fight scene.
A few things to work on: maybe some voice talent, fix the grammar for easier reading, and faster-paced action wouldn't hurt.
For this, I vote 4/5 and I'm recommending it for the Cats collection. I hope to see more. =)
Definitely not the best movie I've seen...
Actually, no where close. But it was your first flash, and overall, I think it was actually kind of good, if not graphically stunted.
The story was good, but a little hard to follow in the beginning. Sound effects, especially the guns, were also good.
The ending was really abrupt. I hope this is the first in a line of (hopefully) graphicly successful sequels.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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