its so funny its scary
this was so funny i showed it to all my freinds and my dog she laughed so hard we had to drag her out of the room, she has problems
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Episode 1 of Cloudy Visions
"Fireworks for Less"
The first episode of an ongoing flash cartoon series starring me and my friend Stephen, dealing with (and causing) all kinds o' problems.
Daniel is inspired by a TV commercial to buy some fireworks. After an unexpected turn of events, the duo sneak into Mexico and run into one particularly sought after character.
Check out CloudyVisions.com for more stuff.
Length: approx 7:30
Edit: I aknowledge that this cartoon has some similarities in humor and style to Tomorrows Nobody. I don't agree at all that's it's "stolen" or "copied", those claims are just ridiculous. TN is the series that inspired me to make a flash cartoon series, which is why I link to their site at the end of the episode, but as the series evolves and expands it will adopt more of it's own style. I'm writing the script for episode 2 now and trust me, it's even more unique than episode 1. I have nothing against Chase from TN, even though he's said some unkind things to me. I'm sure he's a good guy who just likes adopting a cruel persona. At any rate, I'm very thankful to Tomorrows Nobody and do not intend to insult them by "stealing" their ideas, so don't try to be some kind of a watchdog. Thanks!
okay....
The jokes were funny but it was so long that they were spread out over a to long time. my advise is to shorten it right down. 5/10 2/5
Oh boy...
I hate to be rude - but i wish i was dead. The humor was executed poorly. Take a look at Tomorrow's Nobodies. Thats some good stuff, but it looks like you have already. I hope this doesnt explode into a whole Eric Bauman thing.
VentMultimedia responds:
Well we all have to start somewhere, and honestly if you wish you were dead because of my cartoon, you need some serious help from friends (if you have any) and family.
umm...Yeah
i was...ummm........yeah. yeah. boobies would have been nice too. its like TN with a tiny hint of legendary frog mixed with a giant turd in one of those 'bullet' blender thing on infomercials. ddevelope your own stily. when i stated drawing i drew alot of influences i liked. it took me a while to get my own and i'm sure you will to. keep working and have a NICE DAY! SUICIDE IS NOT THE RIGHT WAY OUT. just keep that in mind. dont think that coment was realted or even ment 4 you but i'm not saying its not.
Meh..
It feels very borrowed and unoriginal. A for effort. But besides that nothing to interesting...