Score: 2
"it was alright, here's a few tips!"
date: August 31, 2007
1st i think the tweens were way too slow and would lose the audiences attention very quickly, try increasing frame rate to make it faster 18 or 20 is good.
Secondly it didn't make any sense.
Third, you need alot more happening on screen, and the delays where nothing is going on, need to be much shorter. You also need to include alot more fbf(frame by frame) animation to make it interesting, like with the white thing, which i still don't know what the hell it was?
Lastly don't listen to the previous unconstructive reviews posted by the dickhead nerds on the site.
It sorta reminded me of Felix Massie's work, or the fan's of his, work.
Next time try harder, good luck!