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This is my 1st flash ever Ejnjoy.
Not bad at all for your first!
Looked good! Work on your animation, but otherwise it was decent. Although, not terribly exciting (maybe some music?) and definitely needs more action!
Missing boys, haunted roads, and vampires, oh my!
First flash? Very nice with room to improve. The only advice i could offer is to look through the reviews.
It was quite slow at parts, e.x. the throwing of the holy water. The audio was choppy. But its a nice story, and i wonder what happened to the boys? Will that be answered in the near future? Maybe they, too, are now vampires? Just some suggestions :D
I'd say it's pretty good for your first flash. The animation went kinda slow after they were in the shack though...
Next time, you should spend more time on the audio work and see if you can cut out any background noises.
Hmm needs some work
You really need to speed upi the fps on this. Its not a bad start
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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