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Aug 29, 2007 | 7:53 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place August 30, 2007

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    Goth Dark and twisted, just like you.

Author Comments

*June 2011 Update

For anyone interested in watching more of my recent dark animations and artwork visit my website at:
www.jonny-lawrence.co.uk

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Collaboration of ideas between me and my mate

The tail of a man who wished for eternal life...with one draw back when under the gaze of the moonlight.

We had been making a few character poems a while back and i felt this one needed to be animated to help show what i was imagining. The character i designed is also in an animation set i made so check that out too www.darkgaruda.deviantart .com

I'm pretty useless when it comes to poetry so my mate did that while i did the rest

You may need to replay this once for reading the poem, and after to see the details i added heh

for the full version of the poem erm i have it somewhere but if you're interested ah whatever...i had to cut some it up so, hope it makes sense and hope you can read it...enjoy!

Music
-Killswitch Engage: 'My Last Serenade'
-Silent Hill - 'Main Theme'
-Silent Hill 2 - 'Stairs of Fire'

Reviews


XambesiXambesi

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Oh god, the awful MUSIC

The music was horrible and repetitive, the animation second rate and also repetitive, and the text mind numbingly slow.
I'm sure you can do better; you obviously have potential.


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crazyguy473crazyguy473

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

it was just words

the poem was......ok.......but i need more if i wana read i wouldent be on the internet



majintom25majintom25

Rated 0 / 5 stars

kinda stupid

god done in that night before christmas emo stlye jst really freakin dumb



TosherTosher

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I didn't like it.

It was a bad poem, for a start. Read more Chaucer or Shakespeare to get an idea of what poetry should be like.

Get rid of that annoying white layer behind the text. How am I supposed to 'see the details [you] added' when there's a thick mist covering up everything?

Lastly, make it more exciting, I was hoping for an actual story, not just a mediocre (at best) oem scrolling over a loop.

Must try harder.



JoPissJoPiss

Rated 0 / 5 stars

annoying

This is not an animation, nor is it a game, it's not an interactive movie and it hardly has any creativity. There for I really don't think this is the kind of animation that deserves to even be on this site. Any one can make an animation of a dude walking, with a story and some creepy music.