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Aug 29, 2007 | 7:53 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place August 30, 2007

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    Goth Dark and twisted, just like you.

Author Comments

*June 2011 Update

For anyone interested in watching more of my recent dark animations and artwork visit my website at:
www.jonny-lawrence.co.uk

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Collaboration of ideas between me and my mate

The tail of a man who wished for eternal life...with one draw back when under the gaze of the moonlight.

We had been making a few character poems a while back and i felt this one needed to be animated to help show what i was imagining. The character i designed is also in an animation set i made so check that out too www.darkgaruda.deviantart .com

I'm pretty useless when it comes to poetry so my mate did that while i did the rest

You may need to replay this once for reading the poem, and after to see the details i added heh

for the full version of the poem erm i have it somewhere but if you're interested ah whatever...i had to cut some it up so, hope it makes sense and hope you can read it...enjoy!

Music
-Killswitch Engage: 'My Last Serenade'
-Silent Hill - 'Main Theme'
-Silent Hill 2 - 'Stairs of Fire'

Reviews


slyatonslyaton

Rated 4 / 5 stars

its a good poem not a video

poems are not videos but its good



inuyasha061inuyasha061

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice

what else is there to say but "nice"



MongolyMongoly

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice

good music for the feeling and tosher dosent know poetry poetry is anything you want it to be its a feeling and he felt a good deal on this so lay off i bet you couldent even make a poem half as good as he/she made. 10/10



73hl337b0bb0y73hl337b0bb0y

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

O_O

Not bad at all. However, you forgot to mention the FF7 theme thingie in your music credits. Sorry if you did, and I didnt notice.



TosherTosher

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I didn't like it.

It was a bad poem, for a start. Read more Chaucer or Shakespeare to get an idea of what poetry should be like.

Get rid of that annoying white layer behind the text. How am I supposed to 'see the details [you] added' when there's a thick mist covering up everything?

Lastly, make it more exciting, I was hoping for an actual story, not just a mediocre (at best) oem scrolling over a loop.

Must try harder.