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NOTE: THIS IS THE REVISED VERSION OF EPISODE I

COREY STUCK IN PURGATORY EPISODE I:
The unfortunate demise of Mister Schmorey

Meet corey, a young redneck who excels in slacking and such. His life consist of sleeping, eating, drinking, and listening to Heavy Metal.
But today everything changes, when Corey gets hit by a huge truck..

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mOOhamOOha

Rated 5 / 5 stars

great work

can't believe this got such a low score - great character drawing, and scene composition - ppl just expect cheap humour i guess

great work - can't wait for the next episode...



muchcoolerthanumuchcoolerthanu

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow suprisingly excellent

with a score of under 4.00 i thought this would be bad but its really somthing its amzing it doesent put you to justice, this is much better than that aladin 3150 or whatever its called, the part in hell i really thought earth worm jim was going to appear same belch noises and same cat hell theme tune ^^ im going to go watch all the other eps well done with this one!



Arsenal-FanArsenal-Fan

Rated 5 / 5 stars

YAY

OMG i have been waittin for that episode since eva!!!! thank uuuu!!! luv luv luv luvvvv it!!!! keep up da good work!!! excellent!! ^_^



Admiral-RAdmiral-R

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

A very few improvement

Hi,
I remember the original one. A few more scenes has been added/deleted to this one such as the fall to hell.

The very good point (in the story) now is that we see what St-Pierre (St Peter in english) was reading to judge Corey. As far as I remember, these were reasons as a point of discordance in the first movie and you did great to imput this.

I don't see why you want to remove your ancient work even when the new one is better. I mean, it's a part of your flash technique growing and its interesting to see diffrences in it from the firs release to the latest.
The other way to go is to swap the movie. It's illegal if the movie doesn't fit, but for improvement there are no problems you can update it without submitting a new one.

The artwork you do is appreciable. You use a good match of high-quality pictures in teamwork with flash effects and graphics. The result is very interesting as only a few artists succeed to make something good to the eye with those 2 worlds.
Some effects were missing. To be accurate, when he sleeps, the baseball cap is a pic posted over the desktop. It doesn't looks like on a desk because of it's shape and no angle.

The sound was of very good quality, which explains possibly the major part of the 9.6 Mb the movie requires. It shouldn't be a problem to most users though. Musics selection could be different but they were very good from my point of view, considering as well it fit the movie. Voice actor was of high quality too.

The part with major lack is the interactivity. I know it's a movie but still has to get some. No replay button, no pause button and if the viewer pause it with the menu, the sounds keep going without the images (because the sound should stop too). Fix it by using the stream option on the sound property (layers -> frame -> property).

Overall it's a VERY good movie (I insist) but I consider it needs some little more work.

Well done!
AdmiraL-R


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BerderBerder

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The original episode I was better

This one added some graphical razzle-dazzle but you lost the most important thing: comic timing. The beginning was too long. Also heaven wasn't cartoony enough.

Also, you changed the story by showing that Saint Peter actually was looking at a list of Corey's sins. The way I imagined it before, Corey is actually a good guy who just looks dumb, and Saint Peter judged him on his appearance or was reading the wrong sheet.

Overall, it wasn't as funny as the original. You did it right the first time, there was no need to redo it. I'd rather see some more story development on Corey.


dnzTV responds:

the changes were applied BECAUSE of story development.. you will find out what i mean in the future episodes:) thanks for reviewing !