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This is my first flash ever, so please go easy on me. It's not very long, and isn't that good. And remember, this is my first flash, so please go easy on me. I really need some constructive critiscism.
YOU REALLY NEED SOM,E PRACTICE. GET YOUR SHIT STRAIGHT!
Very good... but not perfect.
It definately isnt perfect, but u have potential. You know what would make it even better? If he pointed to a cliff!!!! (Inside joke)
well, you spend time on it...but you also wasted it!
this is a crap, try to do a better thing next time.
and you say mines are bad!
What just happened?
Well, the graphics were reminescent of primitive cave art, so if that was the style you were looking for it was kinda cool. Try spending more time on the artwork, and maybe give more movement to the background like the clouds and whatnot other than just horizontal movement.
Okay, it was alright 4 ur first flash.
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