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Aug 24, 2007 | 4:00 AM EDT
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The source of Ida's misfortune (and that of those around her) is revealed at last.

Part 2 of 2.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

the best

that was the best serious short ever


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Uhm. Creepy.

This is great, and I saw it forever ago, but, there's a new movie coming out called "Case 34" about a girl who's parents had been murdered by strange beasts, and everyone who tried to help her had something bad happen do her. I'm also pretty sure that a whole bunch of bad stuff happens and she gets thrown in a lake. I thought it was strange how similar that it seemed to this story. The movie isn't exactly out yet, so, I don't really know exactly if it's like this...But oh well.
:\ Even though I don't think you could do anything, I figured you might (need to) know.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Book Worm

Idas story would make a superb novel... along with all your other stories.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very good

Amazing as usual. Part 1 & 2 were both great. Love your stories. Keep it up.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


It was the greatest thing I ever saw in my life.

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