My brother and some of his friends thought up the story and asked me to make an animation, since I haven't used flash in a while and I am still kind of new at it, so I thought it would be a good place for me to start.
Since I am still new at this please be understanding and don't blam because it doen't quite match up with the pros here.
I optimized the audio but I have had audio problems on NG before so if there are any I will fix them.
***EDIT***
If you are going to give a critical review, offer some constructive criticism. Not just you suck you poo head...