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this is my first flash and I DREW ALL THE PICTURES. please do not get mad if it is too short. this took a long time to draw.
THIS FLASH HAS BEEN ON FOR ALMOST A WEEK AND NO ONE HAS VOTED. IF IT IS BAD DONT JUST LEAVE, WRITE ME A REVIEW AND I WILL FIX IT. OR JUST GIVE ME A RATING.
I READ ALL MY REVIEWS I just do not answer them all if you want me to answer it tell me in your review.
Thanks for reading this
a perfect flash
Really creative drawings,funny storyline,MAN!This things the whole package,please make another soon
umm...... ok I guess I will make another one, when my other computer
(which has flash) get fixed.
anyway thanks for the review
u've drawn you're own mario, i like it (which is rare)
wow, thanks that means a lot seriosly
funny.....should deffinatly be continued
thanks for the review
That was great!
Great for a first flash. One suggestion: Add some jokes. People like humor.
Definately not bad for a first. (even though the 'My First Flash' excuse is VERY overused; even if it's true) It could use quite some improvement on the drawings. I suggest tracing. If you'd like, I could PM you on how to do it. Next, work on lip synching ^^;
And finally, you should probably create more frames of Mario/Luigi walking, and such.
All in all, not bad for a first....I've seen worse (like mine ^^")
I have seen yours and it is not that bad infact it is pretty good
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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