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Phew... my first flash didn't get blammed... hope this one won't.
Another simple story: a guy goes through the city to meet his girl... and gets a pleasant surprise.
Im really sorry for the poor tweening and other errors in this presentation... I'll do better in the next one.
That's all for now... Peace out. Rock On!
Hey not bad,
Only gave you a six here, but voted hire to give you a bit of my awesome 1.9x vote protection! a few problems, i SWEAR the building needs to be checked out, and that kiss was so passionate, the girls torso imploded! and is it me? or at the end i think i may have been getting dislexia.... those problems are always easy to fix, but can be missed easily too... so my suggestions for you? start slow, dont really submit things till your comfortable, work on your art and tweening, and enjoy it!
id ask you to check out my stuff, but oh, wait, it got blammed lol. (it WAS a spoof film, so i DID expect it.)
Regards n shit, swap.
It really got me, a peaceful place away from all the madness not just on Newgrounds but in the world too, if this gets blammed I will be upset.
Graphics - 7/10
Animation - 7/10
Story - 5/10
Overall - 9/10
To be honest with ya, im not really a fan of this romance things but it was OK i guess. BTW probably u noticed those waveing effect things, they were quite disturbing :s i suggest you use Motion tween instead of Shape :O ;
you got talent... if this is really your second flash looking forward to more
hey i liked it...
but you really need to work on your drawing and tweening. Like with all the buildings you used the line tool, and for everything else as well. Everything was straight. It looked kinda odd. Also a nice walking animation would be nice.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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