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A short story about bully

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Jam-Bot

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Date Submitted

08/16/2007 | 05:43AM EST

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Movie | 88.7 KB

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Current Score

2.19 / 5.00

Score Rank: #98,188
Popularity Rank: #121,824

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Author Comments

Movie type progrum. No sound because on a different computer to normal so couldn't get to my random hourdes of video game music.

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Average Score: 1.0 / 10

Score: 1
PSP-Monkey

"Just start again."

date: August 16, 2007

The story was ok - bullied kid gets payback, but the graphics, sound, and animation was terrible - the bully wasn't even colored in, he just had scribbles. draw some backgrounds as well. This was just a disaster.

In saying that, don't give up and try again, try harder - a lot harder. Flash isn't easy.

August 16, 2007

Author's Response:

The bully not being coloured in was symbolic... And I tried to make the animation at least half-assedly good. But meh, at least this didn't get blammed in twenty minutes like all the rest of my stuff.

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