Niiiice
this is really nice, but it needs a little improving... you should work a little with your running and i dont reallt like the blood, because it's just a puff of red particles... But otherwise, GREAT ANIMATION!!!!
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This is by far one of my best movies out, didn't take too long but i'm sure you'll enjoy the seriousness and humor packed in.
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Cheers.
It was great
It was nice,but it needs a bit of improving,like blook going around his face and stuff like that...you could really make a nice series with that concept.
Was great
Nice animating you put allot of effort into it but next time you make a stick movie can you put some more voice acting in ?
nicee!!
not bad.....really nice... the shot effects are cool... and the blur too...maybe you should pute more blood that remains sqhashed on the stickguys
Excellent work.
I followed the request in your profile to watch this. I understand that you put a good amount of work into it, and you are eager for moral support. I'm not a super fan of stick figure animation, but I still think it was good. I liked the violence. My favorite part was the special effects. You are very young, yet you have very good animation skill. My tip to you is to harvest it and continue to strive to improve yourself. In a few years you could become one of the famous ones on Newgrounds, or even make money from it.
A few days ago I typed newgrounds.com/portal/random and came across a very odd flash. It is called 'Sperm Wars', which was made back in the year 2000. At the end of the flash it showed a link to the artist's website. The flash wasn't even near as good as this one, you should look it up. Anyway, I clicked on the link just to see if the website was still there after all those years. It automatically redirected to his current website. He's now a skilled flash artist who charges people up to $750.00 to make custom flashes. I sent him an email and asked him about his old flash that I watched. To my surprise he replied back the same day and told me that it was literally the first thing he ever did in flash, and jokingly told me not to tell anyone.
It just goes to show you that if you keep working hard, you can get places. Keep it up!