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This is a short flash I made when I was 15 years of age. Quite amateur but I was developing my skills as a storyteller Now I look a few years back and I notice many faults :P but i loved my creative spirit. Hope you enjoy :)
very enjoyable movie, although it felt to much like a movie preveiw. next time work a bit more on the artwork/character movement, it felt stiff and more fluid movement and smoother/less stiff lines will bring ur series to another level. all in all a great first movie, cant wait for number 2 !
Lol, there was a guy with Elvis hair.
I liked the wide variety of scenes and the music was pretty good. But you need to work on your drawings, like the weapons for instance. They look so blunt and cumbersomely shaped.
Nice movie, a bit slow and boring at the end. Just before the credits, I was expecting a new battle or something like that, but well ok...
Graphics were a mix of drawing qualities and noob geometric figures. It was strange but I was 100% in the flow of this movie. The differents scenes you're showing are full of characters, objects and animation and that's a very good point! Try to use the brush next time, i'm sure you can do something really smooth!
Lots and lots of potential!!
Yeah dude, this wasnt exactly very good, but you definetly have skill! I know it takes long to make something like this, hard work, and then people are just gonna say "LOL, his hair bent weird!! Zero!!"
But don't let that disencourage you! Really, I rarely see movies with this much of potential! Keep learning and good luck!! :D
the graphics were crap im sure u gonna get better its just this one wasnt good
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