Score: 10

"Ha!"

by: ductape723

date: March 30, 2008

The phoenix was funny! "Um, let's see, i'd like better service" he he. That was funny.

Score: 10

"Hamburger with Pickles"

by: RantingSquirrel

date: August 12, 2007

i thought it was funny, and the Phoenix kinda reminds me of myself (except for his like of pickles). :) also as a follow up on what Yhtomit said, befor Fawks shows up to make his Order, you will notice that Harry makes a comment about buying a new "broom." It isn't that hard to make the connection!

Score: 9

"Funny!"

by: Yhtomit

date: August 12, 2007

Nice job on this. It was pretty funny, although the characters coulda moved but oh well, it's not that big of a deal. Nice peice of work here.

Oh, and to those who didn't get the link between this and Harry Potter here it is:

The bird is the pheonix on the front of the adult version of Order of the Pheonix book, and here it is ORDERING something in a resteraunt, and the guy behind the counter is Harry (you can see the lightning scar), so it does actually make sense.

Score: 8

"Good"

by: trdef1

date: August 12, 2007

everone who is saying its nothing to do with harry potter read the description. Its a literal take on the title. Quite good work but it needed a bit more....... er ...... pickles?

Score: 7

"not the best"

by: dex8118

date: August 12, 2007

well nex time try to make characters move not just stand there and talk